Peer Feedback...

'The parts all fit together well, though i'm not sure why you didn't put any of the pink on the front page- especially on the logo as you have used that on your contents. The fonts really fit the genre, and I love the angle of the photo on the front cover and how it's put together- looks professional :)'

'I like the continuity in the magazine with the colour scheme of pink and black, they go well together and are elegant which relates to your target audience of young women. The picture effects on the double page spread also look really elegant and pretty, so that works well! The only things I would say are the DPS font is quite small and you can't read it. Also the front cover is very muted and doesn't really seem to fit with the pages. Other than that it looks really good!'

'I love the colour scheme I think that goes really well for the target audience. All the images look really professional and good too. I like the layout of the DPS - there's colour and lots to look at.'

I was really happy with this feedback because it said exactly what i thought about not using the pink on my front cover as i did in my contents, this only happened because i was rushing to get my draft finished and completely forgot to edit my contents page. I'm completely redoing my colour scheme and changing the layout of my front cover and contents so it looks more professional. All the critisism i got was constructive so i can definately work on what my peers think didn't flow well or look right.